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Titel: JohnLock
Author: me
Genre: romance i guess?
Rating: PG
Author's note: this is 100% fictional


'John, have you seen my phone?' Sherlock asked me. I looked up and frowned.
'Why?' I asked. He never used his phone.
'Because I need it' He said while throwing stuff everywhere and making a mess of the apartement. I sighed.
'It's on the table' I said. He threw everything off the table and found his phone by hearing a soft tud when it landed on the floor. He picked it up and started tapping away. It looked like he was doing something hard, because he had a kind of pained expression on his face. I thought about what he could be doing, but decided to shrug it off and continued to read the paper. I was just about to read something about drunken driving or something, when my phone bleeped, saying I got a text. I picked it up from the little table and saw it was from Sherlock. I frowned and looked at him. He was staring at his feet. Weird, I thought. I opened it.
'Hey John, I think I may kind of like, or possibly even love you. Will you go to the theatre with me? Xx' It read. I blushed. I looked at Sherlock again. He looked so fulnerable, looking at his feet, shuffling a bit uneasy. I had never seen him like this, so shy and small. I smiled a bit and stood up. I walked to him.
'I'd be honoured' I said to him. He looked up with big eyes.
'Really?' He whispered. I smiled brightly.
'Really' I said. A grin spread on his face. He locked hands with me and leaned his forehead to mine. It was perfect.
sooo I decided to try to write some JohnLock ...
tell me what you think (:
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:icondraconis28:
draconis28 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Awwww it's cute! :)
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Summer-Breezie Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
D'aawwww, made me smile :-)
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:iconmitzi13:
mitzi13 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Writer
Awe... This made me smile while being sick and that's nearly impossible. <3
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lifeaftercheckmate Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Bwahaha! Of course he texted! Oh, this was perfect. More, more! ^.^
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IZZAME123 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
er vulnerable not fulner-able
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:iconizzame123:
IZZAME123 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
This is very cute... but it's vulnerable, not vulnerable, hehehe.
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:icontutu1bfan:
tutu1bfan Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
AAAAAAAAAH THIS IS SO CUTE
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MarFitzherbertFletch Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVED IT!!!! :squee:
It was beautiful! :love:
Big Johnlock Shippe here! :la:
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:iconnatje2000:
Natje2000 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
waaah thats sooooo cute!! <3<3
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:iconwolf-starlight:
Wolf-starlight Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So cute!!! Clap 
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IAmAliceStrange Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this.
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:iconkingofhearts709:
KingofHearts709 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
This is adorable <3
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:iconholster262:
holster262 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student
This is so cute <3
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:iconsarumad:
SARUMAD Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww they are always so cute together ! Anyway, good writing! uwu  waitin for more!!
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Elie-TheBlueWolf Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Awww this is so nice and cute >v< Well, Sherlock acting vulnerable in front of John is always cute xD 
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HomestuckTaco Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist
So Adorable! you should definitely write more!
Johnlock is such a good ship
them feels i can't owfsjlcpoeynqtp94cflj Dead
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:iconholster262:
holster262 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Student
Aw so cute :)
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:iconrain162:
Rain162 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KYAAAAH!! THIS IS SO CUTE!!
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:iconunsuitablekale:
UnsuitableKale Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
SO ADORABLE!!
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XxRavenUchihaxX Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha my dear, with an adorable little story like this, I believe that you will love this -> www.youtube.com/watch?v=lmGlcg… :D
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evami Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh my god that video is so adorable! sajkdh so sweet :3
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prussiaawesome37 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Aaaaawww! This is so cute! I love it!
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:iconlunaeverdeen:
lunaeverdeen Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
So.... CUTE!!
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:iconpadme212:
Padme212 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
I died with this <3 <3 <3
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:iconsuperwholock4ever:
Superwholock4ever Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
CUTE!
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:iconthedoctorsdaughter23:
so cute and like PERFECT!! :)
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John-lock4lyfe Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013
OMFG THAT WAS SO CUTE AND ASDFSDFDSAFDFASDF 
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:icondoctorwholover465:
doctorwholover465 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
bit short but very sweet :D
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dovewingandbella Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
like john!! lol adorable david
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:icondoctorwholover465:
doctorwholover465 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XDXD I'm not sure he'd appreciate u saying that. (presuming the david u speak of is my icon) yh, I found the pic on google images. He's still my fav Doctor.
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:icondovewingandbella:
dovewingandbella Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
well martin is short! I love Tennant. my doctor. Always... 
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:icondoctorwholover465:
doctorwholover465 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
same. Though 11 is my second fav, and 9 my third.
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:icondovewingandbella:
dovewingandbella Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
same. and 4 is 4th! lol
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:icondoctorwholover465:
doctorwholover465 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol, I haven't really seen much of the old Doctor Whos.
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:icondovewingandbella:
dovewingandbella Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
oh you should
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Praxibetel-Ix42 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
This is adorable! <33
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Lena14c Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
ftl. THAT'S SO CUTE!!
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:iconsythemeister14:
sythemeister14 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it's really sweet! Good job!!
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ScarlettBaudelaire Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
awww's xD
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NightmareishRain Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
BAW ITS SO CUTE!!! That was simply precious.
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jesstron21 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
D'AWWWWWWW!
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:iconcrazygirl8789:
CrazyGirl8789 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Aw this is so cute! X3
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TheHayzlenut Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
daaaw a little OOC but it's just so cute >w<
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juliavstheworld Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think this is lovely and so cute.. but don't know if it agrees too much with the characters.. just my opinion..
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:iconevami:
evami Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah I know, it was my first try at Johnlock it's relly hard to get Sherlock right xD
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juliavstheworld Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know, right? He's like a brain with no feels.. but then.. he has feels.. and he hasn't.. argh..!
But it's really good, anyway!
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FlashxWonder Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looooooove it
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:iconevami:
evami Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank youu <3
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HPotterHead Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
Pretty cute ^^ are you gonna write more? c:
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:iconevami:
evami Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have written some more yeah maybe I'll upload some x3
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